Arsie- vujudga kelmoq Occupy egallash



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Arsie- vujudga kelmoq
Occupy – egallash
Valid- kuchga ega
Associated- quyidagi
Phenomenon –g’oyat zo’r
Alleviate- osonlashtirmoq
Issues –muaomalar
Foremost –birinchi o’rinda
Accidents –avariyalar
Occur – sodir boladi
Repeatedly – takror takror
Ultimately – oxirida
Legislation rules –qonun ishlab chiqish va qoidalar
Impose –majburan yuklangan
Consequence – oqibatda natijasida
Prevent – oldini olmoq
Concentrating –diqaatni jamlash
Aggregation –yig’ish
Exhorted –nasihat qilingan
Aforementioned – yuqorida aytib o’tilgan
Such as – kabi
Widening – kengaytirish
Existing = mavjud
This is turn = bu navbatda
In order= tartibda
Available =mavjud
Laudable =maqtovga
Discouraging= tushkunlikga soladigan
Immensely =nihoyatda
Tackle=hal qilish
Concerning = haqida
Enforcing =amalga oshirish
Ride=minmoq
Such –shunday

🔥ESSAY TIME🔥


#Essay_9_transport

Many problems may arise when motorists and cyclists occupy the same road. Despite the valid causes associated with this phenomenon, the government can alleviate the safety issues, I think.


First and foremost, the majority of roads, in some countries, are so narrow that when people use vehicles and cycles in the same road, various accidents occur repeatedly, causing passengers to be disabled or to die ultimately. Additionally, the legislation rules are not the same for both motorists and cyclists. For example, although the maximum speed for car drivers is already imposed, there is no such an important law for cyclists. As a consequence, cyclists can ride through the streets very quickly if they wish, which might prevent motorists from concentrating and driving carefully.
Yet, a broad aggregation of solutions might be exhorted to combat the aforementioned problems. To begin with, the government should invest more funds into the existing infrastructure, such as by widening the roads. This, in turn, helps create more space available in order for all the passengers to drive more easily, because the wider roads are, the easier drivers and riders can move. Another laudable measure can be to introduce similar rules for both motorists and cyclists, thereby discouraging them from speeding up immensely.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the government can tackle the safety problems concerning the trend that motorists and cyclists occupy the same streets by broadening the infrastructure and enforcing the new rules for bicycle riders as well as car drivers.

Band-7.5+


Word count-250
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🔥ESSAY ASSESSMENT🔥

Topic: Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Students plan their route whether to study at university/college or to get a job straight after school(a lack of paraphrasing). I would argue that it is better to absorb new skills and more knowledge from professional teachers(a good answer, but you should also mention the next option too, hereafter you must stay at this clear position). (6.5+)

My version: After graduating from high school, students have to decide whether to pursue their studies in further education or to find a job. Despite several advantages of getting a job right after finishing school, I would argue that it is a better option to assimilate more knowledge and skills from professional educators. (See my paraphrasing techniques and how I am giving my answer) (7.5+)
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🔥 IELTS WRITING TIPs🔥


#BODY_PARAGRAPH

Writing a body paragraph, you should ask yourself these questions.

1-Can you give a clear topic sentence?
2-Are the ideas relevant to the essay question?
3-Do the explanations support the ideas?
4-Is there any evidence for your ideas? A fact or general truth?
5-Did you make your position clear?
6-Can you give a relevant body conclusion? Not repetitive?
7-Is the link or connection to the question clear?

Example: topic...


These days, more and more young people are choosing to study abroad rather than studying in their countries. Advantages and disadvantages?

Body1: There are tangible benefits to studying overseas. On an individual level, as youngsters live abroad, they have to accomplish all the tasks on their own, from going grocery shopping to paying bills. This, in turn, can allow them to boost their independence, thereby maturing into grown personalities more early. From an academic perspective, foreign universities often hire skillful educators and pedagogical experts, who can help provide students with high quality education. If an adolescent studies in Oxford, for example, he can be given continuous assessment and informative feedback by well-qualified teachers. Thus, upon studying abroad, young people thrive and learn more quickly.


(This body paragraph is worth getting 7+easily, because it has a clear topic sentence, two relevant ideas and supportive explanations, as well as evidence and an appropriate body conclusion).
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🔥ESSAY TIME🔥
#Essay_10_employment

Topic: Some people work for the same company or organisation during their whole working life, while others say that it is better to work for different companies and organisations. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People entertain serious thoughts about the effectiveness of staying at the same job forever as opposed to moving into different ones. In my view, the choice between these career paths should be made according to what people are keen on to achieve.
There are various advantages to working for the same employer permanently. First, when this happens in companies or organisations, employees can convincingly demonstrate their loyalty and patience for their workplace, thereby gaining managers' respect and confidence. In effect, this is likely to allow them to get more promotion as well as to achieve brighter job prospects and pay increments, all of which motivate people to stay there forever. Many people, though not all, also prefer this practice due to stimulating working environment. Now that they are provided with a broad variety of perks, incentives and financial rewards, such as bonuses and generous benefits, they do not have any reason to quit their current job.
Nevertheless, some do believe in the upsides of moving to several enterprises and organisations thanks to the concept of creativity and "growing mindset". As long as people work for different directors and collaborate with more job partners, they feel diversified and multiform, which helps boost their creativity. Not only that, but being employed by many companies or institutions can also enable individuals to gain in knowledge about what they are doing. For instance, every car-manufacturing company has their own methodologies to design cars, and therefore by working in most of them, car designers can be more skillful, experienced, and better at their profession. Simply put:if people choose this type of career, they may reap substantial benefits.
Personally, I think that people should be in the sole workplace if they long to experience job satisfaction: however, they also might move to various ones in search of new experiences and knowledge.

Band-7.5+


by Suhrobjon Abdivaliyev.
@WRITING_T
Entertain =kongil ochish
Current –joriy
Collaborate –hamkorlik qilish
Diversified = xilma xil
To gain -erishmoq
Multiform –kop shaklik
Boost - oshirish
Effectiveness = samaradorligi
forever = abadiy
as opposed =aksincha
keen –otkir
employer –ish beruvchi
permanently –doimiy
convincingly - ishonchli tarzda
demonstrate- namoyish qilish
gaining – qozonish
confidence- ishonch
promotion- ragbatlantirish
incentives - ragbatlantirish
stimulating= ragbatlantiruvchi
likely- ehtimol
them –ular
allow- ruxsat berish
brighter= yorqinroq
prospect= istiqbol
through –orqali
environment –muhit
perks= imtiyozlar
provided= taqdim etilgan
financial rewards –moliyaviy mukofotlar
upsides – ustun tomonlari
to several – bir nechtaga
enterprises- korxonalar
mindset =fikrlash
substantial= muhim
reap =o’rish
skilful= mohir
satisfaction= qoniqish
workplace= ish joyi
the same= xuddi shu

3 TASK 2 QUESTION:

Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.
Do you think this is positive or negative development?

In the evening, I will send an 8.0 band and a 9.0 band essays for this topic so that you can not only enhance your vocab/grammar but also find out the difference between these scores.


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🔥ESSAY TIME🔥
#Essay_12_globalization
Thanks to the advent of globalisation, international corporations have opened their branches in every corner of the world. Consequently, the same products are available everywhere and this has made people and countries look the same. In my opinion, this is not exactly a positive change. I will support my stand with valid arguments in the following paragraphs.
First of all, when people everywhere buy the same products, cultural identities disappear. For example, in Shanghai, many foreign clothing companies sell T-shirts to local residents. As a result, few local people wear traditional clothes like qipao now and the traditional clothing industry is dying. Many young people cannot even identify their traditional clothing and fewer people know how to make traditional clothes. If the government took actions to help the traditional clothing, people would be able to keep their cultural heritage and craftsmen working in this sector would not lose their livelihood. Unfortunately, that is not the case and locals are forgetting their culture and ethnicity.
On top of this, buying the same stuff everywhere is bad for local economies and the environment. Oftentimes, products are imported from foreign countries and have to travel thousands of miles before they reach the end user. This does not help the environment or the local craftsmen. The only beneficiaries are multi national companies. Small businesses and manufacturers cannot compete with them and quickly lose their market share and there is less demand for skilled workers who can produce goods with local features. Consequently, people employed in traditional sectors are becoming jobless. For instance, the young generation prefers fast food rather than traditional Chinese food. The market is shrunk for these people who make a living by selling traditional Chinese foods. Likewise, carpenters, cobblers, potters are all becoming jobless in the current scenario.
To sum up, the disadvantage overweigh the benefits when people begin to buy the same goods everywhere and different regions become more and more similar. In this scenario, the cultural heritage will be destroyed and the unemployment rate will rise.

Band-9.0 from a website


Consequently- natijada
Scenario – senariy
Carpenters – duradgorlar
Cobblers – poyabzalchilik
Potters -kulolchilik
Likewise – xuddi shunday
Features = xususiyatlari
Shrunk –qisqargan
Unfortunately –baxtga qarshi
Skilled – malakali
Environment – muhit
Reach –erishish
Less demand – oziroq talab
Ethnicity – kelib chiqishi etnik
Forgetting - unutish
Craftsmen – hunarmandlar
Keep = saqlamoq
Compete = raqobat
Livelihood – tirikchilik
Actions – harakatlar
Took = take= oldi
Even –hatto
heritage - meros
Dying – o’lish
Exactly – aynan
Support –qolab quvvatlash
Residents = aholisi
valid arguments – asosli dalillar
case- holat
🔥ESSAY TIME🔥
#Essay_13_globalization

Today, people can purchase whatever they want in all corners of the globe, which means the whole world is instantly switching to a global village. In my viewpoint, this development is likely to positively affect the individuals and enterprises in equal measure.

On an individual level, people can feel the positive impact of globalisation in many ways. First, while circling the globe and living in foreign countries, everyone may experience feelings of homesickness, isolation and stress. However, now that they already possess enough capabilities to buy the things produced in their own countries, they can alleviate the undue strain caused by nostalgia. In addition, as people are able to buy the same goods in any side of the globe, they have a broader range of choices. This might enable them to pick up the best options over more expensive or low quality ones. Seemingly, this trend has brought people sheer happiness.
Similarly, companies are likely to gain in profit with this ongoing trend. This is because they can reach an infinite number of costumers easily, thereby making great sums of money quickly only if their items are high quality enough. In the past, however, they used to be able to distribute their products to a very limited range of people. Furthermore, small companies, who lack extensive experience, usually take action in enhancing their products to win the fierce competition with major ones, which can allow them to mature more quickly. This, in turn, could also motivate gigants to work on their output on a regular basis. Thus, the footpace of globalisation is of immense help to every company.
In summary, the mounting similarity between countries owing to people being capable of buying the same goods all over the world is a desirable circumstance thanks to its benefits to both people and companies.

Band-7.5+


by Suhrobjon Abdivaliye
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